Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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Overcrowding in cities has many issues in modern life.
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discuss the main reason why
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issue arises, which is overpopulation
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growing
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in an urban area, as a result, migration people from the
countryside
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to big cities, followed by an analysis of the most effective measure to improve the situation. The principal cause of the overflow population in towns is that people transfer from village to big cities due to lack of development
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, and
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leads to an overflow of the population in cities.
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, in
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provide a variety of facilities,
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as
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theatres
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, museums, sports complexes, shopping malls,
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an educational institution, hospitals, and more. In
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reason, villagers choose life in big cities rather than in the
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. Rarely do people realized the importance supplies of the district area as a golden opportunity. For instant, according to recent research, the relocation of people from the village grows at 15% compared with previous years. The best solution to
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problem is overpopulation in towns is that the government should invest money in social infrastructures and entertainment facilities.
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, it could improve the situation in regions, and people could stay in the
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. If it were not for developing conditionals in the
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, we would not stop migration of people.
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, having conducted research among people, scientists have revealed that migrations from the regions reduced
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by
25% due to
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a new infrastructure facility in some areas. In summary, one of the main problems with the growth of population is the lack of developing regions, and it could be solved through regional improvements. I recommended that development and improve not only metropolitan areas and
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the
countryside
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • strain on infrastructure
  • public services
  • overcrowded
  • inadequate healthcare services
  • pressure on educational institutions
  • environmental impact
  • increased pollution
  • waste management
  • destruction of green spaces
  • natural habitats
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