26. Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss

It is a fact that parents play a crucial role in children's growth and development. Some people suggest that the close parenting supervision will benefit children's future life and careers; while, others believe that parents should provide chances for their children to make their own decisions. The essay will discuss both of these types of parents' views. 

To begin

with, parents with the former view believe that their children will benefit their close disciplines. They will provide a safe living environments for them to thrive because in cu

rrent temporary era, 

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a current temporary era

the current temporary era

due to the advanced technology and the globalization, living environment for children's growth has been becoming complicated worldwide, especially in inner cities.

For example

, teenagers are ea

sily t

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easy

o assess a huge amount of contents via the internet or media around them. Some of  negative contents may make teenager readers incline toward bad habits,

such

as violence behaviours, doing drugs, drinking alcohol, and so on.

Therefore

, proper guiding their children's reading will prevent them from

this

 and make them stay in ri

ght track. 

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the right track

On the other hand

, some parents believe that granting some freedoms for their children will enhance the development of their capacities. They believe that too many restrictions during daily activities, similar to living in a greenhouse, will provide comfortable living environments for their ch

ildren but w

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children, but

ill not assist them in executing their capacities to making any decisions.

For instance

, teenagers will have hi

gh m

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higher

otivations in participating the activities they decide to joint and will be willing to accept the outcomes of their decisions.

As a result

,

this

kind of parenting style will assist children to nurture positive attitudes towards their future lives. In conclusion, both kinds of parents will have the above reasons respectively. Too strict parenting methods will limit the development of each child; while, too much freedom will

also

place the child into a risk to develop ba

d habit.

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bad habits

a bad habit

the bad habit

Therefore

, I personally suggest that parents should combine these two views and provide a certain level of freedom for their children to make decision with proper supervisions.