Today more and more tourist are visiting places where condition are difficult such as Sahara or the Antarctic. Discuss advantage and disadvantage for tourist who visit these places.

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These days, tourism becomes flourishing with increasing of holidaymaker. As they are pursuing for a new
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to cure their boredom from their daily
life
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. Providing many favourite locations are often occupied with many tourists, some often choose difficulty over the accommodation
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as some distant land with a number of conditions for valuable
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Volcano, The North Pole or The Amazon. There are many advantages and disadvantage of visiting these places.
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of all, the main advantages is discomforting travel and hostile environment will fend off many casual
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which leave the area intact and pure. As one could
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the pure nature in a long vacation is a great way to improve
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quality. The place located in inhabitant area
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as the Sahara will force them to leave their daily
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behind which calm the
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, visiting an uninhabitable location will leave
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to be with themselves. They
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will enter the solitary state which most of the time could give many good ideas, reviewing their
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and ultimately become calm and shape their minds like many great philosophers
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as Buddha. In the same fashion, untouched nature like these is hardly to visit, If anyone manages to be there, at least it will give them much valuable
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with some nice story and sometimes a new friend.
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, the disadvantages is these lands are mostly hostile. There many cases had experienced serious injury, cripples and the worst case, death. These are from the hazardous environment
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as very low or high temperature, poisonous creatures, wild diseases, and a lot more lethal causes. In the same manner, these areas are far from cities or civilization. In another word, the
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have to expect low to non-accommodation, poor emergency responders and in the worst case there is hardly any medical treatment. In the meantime,
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have to absorb an astonishing travel cost from many tangible needs
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as an experienced local guide, a list of many special equipment and insurance. Death is
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visiting these places. In general, these
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places
are beautiful and packed with great
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like a rare gem. By
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I mean, it is a nice place for any risk able holidaymaker and we should visit once in a
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time.
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