Some people think that government should provide unemployed people with free mobile phone and free internet to help them find jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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start
are starting
to
taking
an exchange of ideas via conversation
talking
about the people who have not able to find jobs because of
thier
of them or themselves
their
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inactivity resulting from a dislike of work
laziness
,
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,
not enough
hardwork
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hard work
for that or else any other
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situation
, some others thought it
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was
good to give some
elecronical
equapment
an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service
equipment
for them by government.Like mobile phones and free wifi or internet access will
helpe
give help or assistance; be of service
help
them to find jobs.
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Some others
Someothers
think it should be a huge responsibility of government.
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According
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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
if we begin to clarify about the advantages
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,
there are
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a lot
lots
of good things we can see in that.Unemployed people
then
can manage their time and they are able to find
job
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jobs
easily.It is good for who have not lots of time to spend for searching a job and
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any other
people who have not
such
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an
expeirance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
about finding a job.And another advantage is it is good for a country to develop
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of them or themselves
their
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economies
by
given
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giving
plethora
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a plethora
of jobs for young
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endowed with talent or talents
talented
unemployed peoples. In case we could talk about
lot
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a lot
of advantages beside we have to talk about disadvantages there are
number
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a number
of disadvantages in
this
time.If we give them free internet access they used to use that for their
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concerning or affecting a particular person or his or her private life and personality
personal
uses
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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
end
they lost their dedication
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in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
they get lazy.
Furthermore
unemployed
yougestes
lost the sprit. In my
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perspective, we
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be cognizant or aware of a fact or a specific piece of information; possess knowledge or information about
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employers are the most
importent
of great significance or value
important
citizens who helped to develop a country
,
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,
but give some mobile and internet is not
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a good idea
to finish
unemployemet
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
.We can think
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a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
thing
such
as free training who can not to effort pay for
that is
good more than that.

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