Write a letter to your friend giving some advice. In your letter • include websites you recommend • say why you recommend them • give some other ideas which you think may be useful

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Dear Aman, Hope you are doing well! I am writing you
this
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letter to give you some advice about a
website
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regarding investing money in the stock market , which you were seeking from me
last
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week, and
that is
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Questrade , which has all the useful tools.
Firstly
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, I recommend
this
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site to you
this
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site because on
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website
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, you will get all updates regarding good
stocks
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, and
also
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you will be able to find the history of the company , which will help to understand the future of those particular
stocks
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.
Lastly
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, if you refer any friend to
this
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website
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by sending a link,
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you will get a $50 voucher to use in
stocks
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. One more useful tool in
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app is that you will get a warning in advance if the
stocks
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start falling. I hope you will check out
this
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website
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and try to use the options which are good for buyers. Regards, Amrit

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Add one more website, because the task says websites.
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Say more about why this site is good for your friend, with one clear example.
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Give one or two more useful ideas, not only the app tool and friend link.
coherence and cohesion
Link your ideas with easy words like first, also, and finally.
coherence and cohesion
Keep each paragraph to one main point.
coherence and cohesion
Use a more natural opening like I am writing to give you advice about websites for stock market learning.
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You answered the topic and gave advice to your friend.
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You gave reasons for the website.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear opening and ending.
coherence and cohesion
Your ideas are mostly easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recommendation
  • usability
  • content quality
  • unique features
  • beneficial
  • educational platforms
  • productivity tools
  • travel guides
  • mobile apps
  • practices
  • current situation
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