A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council – Request that the person returns your bin immediately – Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin

Dear John, My name is George and we are neighbours, I live in apartment number 4. I am writing
this
letter to kindly ask you to return my rubbish bin. I saw you yesterday when you took my rubbish bin by accident I think. I would like to inform you about the rules if you need a new bin you have to get it from the local council. There are a lot of types of items, so I am sure, you will find the right one. I would be grateful if you could return it immediately. In the end, I want to gently inform you about actions I will take if you do not return my stuff until tomorrow. At
first,
I will contact the building supervisor,
additionally
, I will have to inform the police to report a felony. I believe I will not have to take
such
dramatic actions. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any
further
information. Yours faithfully, George.
Submitted by dariusz.slusar on

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task achievement
Your response addresses all the necessary points, but it could be more detailed. Try to provide more specific information about how to obtain a new bin from the local council.
coherence cohesion
Consider improving the logical flow of your letter. Each paragraph should ideally focus on a single idea, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.
coherence cohesion
Make sure all elements of the letter are clearly connected. Adding transitional phrases could help improve coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite yet firm, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are correctly used, providing a formal structure to the letter.

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