A new neighbour has moved in next door and has taken your main rubbish bin. Write a letter to your new neighbour requesting that they return the item. In the letter: – Explain that new bins must be sourced from the local council – Request that the person returns your bin immediately – Inform the person of what further actions you will take should they not return your bin

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Dear John, My name is George and we are neighbours, I live in apartment number 4. I am writing

this

letter to kindly ask you to return my rubbish bin. I saw you yesterday when you took my rubbish bin by accident I think. I would like to inform you about the rules if you need a new bin you have to get it from the local council. There are a lot of types of items, so I am sure, you will find the right one. I would be grateful if you could return it immediately. In the end, I want to gently inform you about actions I will take if you do not return my stuff until tomorrow. At

first,

I will contact the building supervisor,

additionally

, I will have to inform the police to report a felony. I believe I will not have to take

such

dramatic actions. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need any

further

information. Yours faithfully, George.

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task achievement

Your response addresses all the necessary points, but it could be more detailed. Try to provide more specific information about how to obtain a new bin from the local council.

coherence cohesion

Consider improving the logical flow of your letter. Each paragraph should ideally focus on a single idea, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.

coherence cohesion

Make sure all elements of the letter are clearly connected. Adding transitional phrases could help improve coherence and cohesion.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is polite yet firm, which is appropriate for the context.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing are correctly used, providing a formal structure to the letter.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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