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The given line graph illustrates the percentage of people of different
age
 groups who attended
cinema
 from 1984 to 2003. Overall,
cinema
attendance
 grew in all
age
 groups in the given period of time.
Also
, in general, the younger
age
 groups had a higher percentage of
cinema
 visitors than the older
age
 groups. From 1984 to 2003,
cinema
attendance
 rose considerably across all
age
 groups, but the increase was the greatest for the 15-24
age
 groups, which rose from about 18% in 1984 to over 50% in 2003. Though the figures fluctuated between 1992 and 1998,
this
age
 group still went to
cinema
Suggestion
the cinema
 more than any other
age
 group. There was
also
 a substantial rise in
cinema
attendance
 among older people (35 plus). In
this
 case the figures increased over
this
 period from about 2% to over 10%.
Cinema
attendance
 of 7-14 and 25-35 year-olds followed a similar pattern from 1984 to about 2002, which was characterized by some fluctuations throughout.
However
, from 2002 the trends differed in that 7-14 year olds went to the
cinema
 less frequently while
cinema
attendance
 of the 25-44 year olds was on the increase.

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