It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extend you agree or disagree?

It is argued that authorities should concentrate on their own citizens rather than helping all people in the

world

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such

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impossible things.

This

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essay agrees that it is necessary to focus on developing each aspect of themselves.

Firstly

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, helping other countries could decrease

domestic people's quality

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the domestic people's quality

of life and

secondly

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, developing self is

also

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making contributions to the

world

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. Assisting other states will add the economic burdens for a country's citizens. Basically, issuing an

aids

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aid

project for another area needs to spend

billions pounds

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a billion pounds

billion pounds

or even more. The financial and resource

are coming

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is coming

from taxes

of

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on

the public, which means the residents of the state have to pay more for the government in order to help other countries.

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, Chinese government invests a lot of

captial

assets available for use in the production of further assets

capital

for helping education of other developing countries, which causes many international

students

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student

tuition fee are ridiculously low and even cheaper than Chinese students', while the funding for those international students comes from each Chinese citizen's tax. Paying attention to self development is

also

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a reasonable way to

rise

raise the level or amount of something

raise

the

world

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. If a politician is

familar

well known or easily recognized

familiar

with his country and who make it peaceful,

steadily

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steady

and rich, which decrease the risks of poverties, conflicts and

deseases

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

disease

.

In other words

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, there is one less trouble maker state in

this

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world

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.

For instance

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, Lee Kuan Yew, the

first

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prime minister in the history of Singapore, leads people to develop the economy and play a good role between the different great powers.

This

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making

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makes

Singapore jumps from the

third

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world

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to the

first

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world

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only 30 years. Singapore is very

steadily

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steady

and it is one of the best cities in the

world

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, and it

do not need

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does not need

any financial help from other

counties

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

now. In conclusion, the nations should be focusing on their own development

instead

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of squandering too much on the

investement

the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit

investment

of aiding other countries, because

this

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could make the extra financial burden to their own citizens and making self better is

also

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an important way to

contribute the

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contribute to the world

world

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.