Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often believed by some institutions that their personnel dressing should be tidy while a few hold to a high esteem their
staff
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performance in delivering set objectives. In my opinion, both views are valid. As smart dressing portrays a good
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of the company, quality of
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done by the
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speaks to the
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capacity and capability in achieving their goals.
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, a
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is the mirror
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of the organisation he/she works for.
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image
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is reflected in the
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outward appearance to the outside world. An appearance that should be neat and formal, command respect for the
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and by extension the organisation. In fact, some companies like the bank have dress codes for every cadre of
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the work force
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, a number of
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, at the beginning of the year set objectives for their
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and either semi-annually or annually appraise their achievement.
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is used to measure the workers capability and competence in achieving the set goals which form part of the
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organisation's
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with an
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organisation
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funded by Centre for Disease Control (CDC). The funders give us target for different indicators that speaks to the program my institution is implementing. I set my target with my direct supervisor based on my agreed job description and later evaluated based on my performance in achieving those set goals. When I meet my set targets, I in turn achieve the
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organisation's
goal which gives them a good
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to the funders and the outside world. In conclusion, smart dressing and personnel performance both
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in tandem to give the
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high value in the employment market and position the organisation in the competitive market.
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