Some people claim that the government should provide free health care.Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it's better to invest those funds in education and culture.both views.
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the administrator
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the contemporary era
,
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has
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culture
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culturally
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culture
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,
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culture
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another
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authority should include how can people stay healthy Suggestion
higher
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education system
so that individuals can prevent from diseases.Suggestion
the education system
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion