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• Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. • Why is this? • What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Regular supply of power is required globally in order to keep businesses running, and to bring satisfaction to every household. Since the power supplied to household in many countries is irregular, there is the need to provide other means of
energy
 supply. Solar
energy
 has solved the problem of irregular
energy
 supply, and is becoming popular nowadays. In
this
 essay, I will discuss reasons for the use of solar
energy
, as well as the positive and negative effect of
this
 technology.
To begin
 with, the use of solar
energy
 in many countries has provided adequate
energy
 supply to many households across the globe.
Also
, solar
energy
 is truly a renewable source of
energy
, and it can be harnessed in all areas of the world, and is readily available. Unlike some other
energy
, It is impossible to run out of solar
energy
, as long as there is sun, there will always be solar
energy
.
Furthermore
, since most of the
energy
 supplied will be through solar
energy
, the electricity bill will
also
 be reduced.
On the other hand
, it is mostly difficult to purchase solar
energy
, since it is costly, and weather dependent. The efficiency of solar
energy
 drops depending on the weather condition, which makes it to be less effective, since they require sunlight to gather enough
energy
.
Also
, solar
energy
 uses a lot of space,
that is
, the more
energy
 that will be produced, will depend on the number of solar panels that will be needed. In conclusion, the global popularity of solar
energy
 is expected, because it has solved the problem of irregular
energy
 supply. AMD despite the cost, more and more people will continue to purchase it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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