Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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upcoming future
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the upcoming future
artificial
intelligence
shall have a positive impression on people life's and
bring
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development in every
field
whilst
other
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others
think that influence of computer cannot overtake the human's
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viewpoints
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the upcoming paragraphs
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reason, firstly
firstly
it cannot be denied that AI has been playing a part and a
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every task effective, efficient, easy and accurate related to any of the
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fields
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as defence
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education
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automation
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art and
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and so on apart from
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AIs are doing different types of calculation and computational tasks at the same time
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intelligence
reduce
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reduces
ambiguous and mistakes in comparing with
human
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humanity
, and
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increased
degree of
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the quality of being reproducible in amount or performance
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and
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of any
tasks
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tasks, although
although
artificial
intelligence
can work without any break and complete the task rapidly
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Furthermore
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computers
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also uses
is also used
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use in hospitals for different purposes like testing
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sonography
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scans
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X ray, MRI
etcetera
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otherhand
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other hand
, there
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any
negative impact on the
society
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society, firstly
firstly
, AI capabilities of
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performing
multiple task
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multiple tasks
the multiple task
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simultaneously, it
simultaneously it
soon replace human for most common jobs like driving, cooking, customer care,
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a health facility where patients receive treatment
hospital
, and consequences in surge
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the state of being employed or having a job
employment
,
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the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
rate.
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having great diversity or variety
versatile
to
accopmlish
put in effect
accomplish
given duty make human being more lazy and retard which will have
negative impact
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a negative impact
on their health.
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this
phenomenon the crime commitment rate will be influenced significantly by these changes
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This
trend be seen in the
individuals
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individual
individual's
behaviour when they miss the job and will not have a sense of purpose for the future
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In an epilogue
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even though progress in the
field
of artificial
intelligence
will have positive effects on our lives, I think that
this
innovation would cause more harm than good.

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