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It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

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Some people believe that students should
study
 more
history
 and literature.
However
, other people think that studying
science
 and mathematics is more important. From my experience and observation, I think that students should
study
 both
science
 and
history
. Below, I will outline some basic reasons to support my opinion.
First
 of all, I believe that studying
history
 and literature is important for the range of interests of students and people on the whole. It extends the range of interests and teaches people to analyse their
history
. Every person should know the
history
 of the country where he or she was born. Knowledge of
one
's roots and origins gives the opportunity to understand many things that are around.
Second
 of all, I think that
this
 kind of knowledge is essential for students who are going to be lawyers, newspapermen, political figures, etc.
One
 more reason to
study
history
 is that it helps
one
 to analyse mistakes made by ancestors or learn from their wise decisions. From the other side, I think that it is
also
 important for students to
study
science
. Personally, I like studying mathematics because for me it is very interesting to work with figures, analyse them, develop different ways to solve the problem. It teaches
one
 to think logically and improves
one
's ability to think non-typical. I think it is great. Studying of
science
 allows people to improve their living conditions, make discoveries, develop innovations, etc. Scientists work on new vaccines and pills to make our life longer and happier. They make researches in different fields from medicine to space. Because of
this
 kind of knowledge humankind has opportunities to watch TV, fly, using jet aeroplanes, surf the Internet, play computer games, watch movies, drive cars, etc. In conclusion, I think that students must
study
 many things, including
science
 and literature in order to succeed in the modern world.
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