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Some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy too difficult to learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 curriculum have been a paramount consideration for an educational department. It becomes a debatable issue to make some subjects
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 as mathematics and philosophy optional because it seems arduous to learn for some. I partially agree and disagree with
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 concern as I believe mathematics should be a compulsory
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, whereas philosophy can be an optional
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. I intend to discuss my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
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 with, Mathematics is an enormously important
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 to be taught to students as it plays a sterling role to learn other subjects.
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, calculating speed in physics is only possible if numeracy is taught to students.
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, not only it is requisite
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 to take admission in many renowned universities for higher courses, but
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 analytical skills are utmost essential to get hired by many Multinational Companies for various job profiles.
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, if a phobia is not surmounted in childhood, it would pronounce more worse in future.
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, studying mathematics is compulsory for every student till high
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 level. Philosophy is the
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 to teach about humankind's relationships and it is a good
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 to study,
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, making
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 not optional would not only makes students bored but
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 adds additional burden on them. Children have been learning these basic skills from their parents and teachers by observing them.
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, it should not be enforced by making it a required part of the
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 curriculum in their early
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 years as it can be learnt later at territory level. To conclude,
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 both subjects are worth considering, making mathematics compulsory is required in terms of learning other subjects, honing analytical skills that are essential for getting renowned jobs and admitting in reputed universities for pursuing higher degrees. Philosophy can be opted by students as per their interests and it should be optional.
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