The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates, the amount of trash generated in
tonnes
, by three companies over the span of 15 years, starting from 2000 to 2015. It is clear that
,
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Company
C has contributed the highest tonnes
of waste, whereas
Company
B's garbage generation has plummeted over the years.
To start with the eye-catcher, Company
B, has shown a drastic reverse in the accumulation of debris over the years, precisely, a downward graph which started with 8 tonnes
in 2000, fell to 3 tonnes
in 2015, even though it had fluctuated between 2005, reaching 10 tonnes
. Company
A has also
shown a similar style, which opened with 12 tonnes
in the year 2000 and terminated with 8 tonnes
in 2015.
In contrast
, Company
C started with 4 tonnes
in 2000 but steadily stepped-up
to reach 10 Correct your spelling
stepped up
tonnes
in 2015, to
becoming the highest rubbish producer.Change preposition
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