Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society, but they have not agreed on what an ideal society would be like. What do you think is the most important element of a perfect society in the modern world? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

There is no room for doubt that a topic central to a long-running and ongoing debate has revolved around a question about the most reasonable definition of a model

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. In my viewpoints,

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an ideal

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has been stemmed from the blend of many suitable points, I lean towards social cohesion is the most vital determinant, if not the prerequisite. Concomitantly, there are some effective way to, at least, improve the

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. Supposedly, a socially cohesive

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can be able to exert many positive influences on other social aspects and contribute to coping with a great number of social evils.

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and foremost, when all humans reach the highest level of solidarity, one will care about other’s struggles, especially poverty, and share

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in contact with each other or in proximity

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, meaning that mutual compassion, philanthropy will be likely to appear all the time, everywhere.

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,

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,

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thing can lead to narrowing the

desparity

inequality or difference in some respect

disparity

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between the haves and have-nots, widely considered as a beneficial, knock-on factor which can help to reduce criminals, wipe out slums,… and many paramount social matters. As suggested, there is a decisive interrelation between how perfect a

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become and the social bond. From those above arguments, I suppose that in order to create

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a quintessential civilization

quintessential civilization

the quintessential civilization

of mankind, everyone,

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, have to eradicate the sense of self-centeredness in our mind. From that point, we need to give prominence to the collective consciousness as opposed to be preoccupied and engrossed by each own interests.

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, it is important to note that obtaining

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thing lingeringly hasn’t ever been a straightforward task.

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, from being a child, one

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to be tangibly taught about those aforementioned points in a meticulous way

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as in official curriculums. In conclusion, on the basis of

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-mentioned arguments, of all the indispensable elements, social cohesion has been regarded as the most vital precursor for a flawless humanity’s world. So, to accomplish

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tricky objective, each individual

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awareness about how to dispose of selfishness and those morals should be of primary curriculums.