The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides information about the
amount
of fast food consumed in the United Kingdom over a twenty-y
ears
Suggestion
year
period between 1970 and 1990. Overall, it is clear that the
consumption
of
hamburger
,
fish
and chips increased considerably.
In addition
, the
amount
of
pizza
that people consumed declined gradually. In 1970,
Pizza
was the kind of fast food with the highest
consumption
, on average, people consumed 300 grams, compared to approximated 60 grams for
fish
and chips, 40 grams for
hamburger
. Between 1970 and 1980, there was a sharp growth in the
amount
of
hamburger
,
fish
and chips consumed; to 80 grams and 150 grams respectively.
In contrast
, there was a rapid drop in the
amount
of
pizza
that people consumed, from 300 g
ram
Suggestion
grams
to 220 grams. In 1985, the
consumption
of
pizza
plummeted s
ignificant
Suggestion
significantly
to 200 grams; the
amount
of
hamburger
consumed continued to rise to 120 grams. From 1985 to 1990, the
amount
of
fish
and chips reached its peak at 500 grams. During the same period, there was a dramatic growth in the
amount
of
hamburger
that people consumed from 120 grams to 280 grams.
Moreover
, there was a slight increase in the
consumption
of
pizza
, with a rise of over 10 grams in just 5 years from 1985 to 1990.
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