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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh theq disadvantages?

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In our modern life, some people think that fast foods and
convenience
 foods are becoming a lot of opportunities that help to people to live better while others think that there are some disadvantage sides to it. In
this
 case, l will discuss both views. It is claimed that right nutrition and. Variety of
convenience
 foods are considered an important part of today our living in society.
Besides
this
, precisely, there are a lot of useful sides of fast
food
 that always busy, people can easily call for
food
 so that their work is not interrupted.
As a result
, peoples who are all
time
 work people are can easily come to their work on
time
 and it is true that there is no misunderstanding to meet the needs of the humans.
In addition
, wasting lessen
time
 for cooking at home, people should consume these types of
food
 and it is obvious that
this
 is less harmful to people's balance. By way of illustration, hot dogs, burgers, pizzas and hamburgers.
On the other hand
, despite having mentioned advantage sides of
convenience
 foods, there are some disadvantage sides that there some damage sides of people's more living of consumption of the fast
food
 as proven by the world's top hospitals.
Consequently
, because of upstanding people do consumption of fast
food
, to observe various diseases on them. To save continuous safely of their life is totally important part of our living world. In conclusion,
time
 saving is the main advantage of the availability of
convenience
food
,
however
, the disadvantages of regular consumption of ready made
food
 outweigh the advantages.
Therefore
, it is recommended that people should give up their dependence on packaged
food
 and consume more homemade
food
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience foods
  • Modern lifestyle
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Time-saving
  • Easy
  • Wide variety
  • Convenient
  • Busy individuals
  • Food waste
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