You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • say why the company should consider you for the job

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to apply for the vacant job availaible as a assistant manager in your restaurant. My name is Roopkamal and I moved here six months ago from the United Kingdom . Currently, I am pursuing

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master's degree in Business Management at the University of Waterloo ,Canada.

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, I am residing close to your restaurant. I have three

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work

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experience as a Shift Manager at

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restaurant . I am certified as a best people manager in my previous work experience .

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, I am expert in making schedules and follow up on accurate procedures regarding food safe. I am

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available

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as well as

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from 3 pm to 10 pm .

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your job advertisements , my full-time availaibility meet your needs .I hope I

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. I am really excited to be a part of your team. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Roopkamal.

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Coherence & Cohesion

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Consider briefly mentioning how your skills can specifically benefit the company to strengthen the persuasion of your application.

Coherence & Cohesion

Good structure and clear division of paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point.

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Complete and relevant details about self, work experience, and availability.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

168 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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