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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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 students are choosing to
study
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 abroad. Despite higher
university
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 fees, studying in a foreign country will give students a multicultural
experience
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. In my opinion, the multicultural
experience
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 outweighs the higher
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 fees.
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experience
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 will help the students during and long after their studies.
TO BEGIN
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 WITH, you will be put in the situation to interact and learn in a different language, which will increase your
abillity
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
ability
 to
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 and express yourself.
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, when I went to
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 in Serbia, ten years ago, all the classes
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were
 held in Serbian, which helped me to learn the language much faster, and encouraged me to communicate more with my colleagues and local people.
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, socializing with my colleagues led to a better understanding of their way of life and traditions.
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, the main disadvantages are that you are going to live in a foreign country, where you will have to spend more money on accommodation and special student fees. You have to rent an apartment during your stay and pay for all the expenses.
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, as a foreign student, you have to pay extra money for your studies, in comparison to local students.
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, when I lived in Beograd, Serbia, I opted to find a rent close to the
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 because I wanted to save time and money on transport but, the rent was higher in comparison with other parts of the city.
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, the biggest expense was the student fee for foreigners, and in order to pay it, I had to work part time. In conclusion, despite all the disadvantages, a big percentage of the students are opting to
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 abroad. The chance to have
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 multicultural
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 cannot be missed, even though the costs
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 the studies are higher. From my point of view, you will become a better and a more complete human being if you choose to
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 abroad and embrace the multicultural
experience
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.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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