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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#teachers #society #support
Job is one of the most important factors that determine the status of an individual in a
society
. As more as a job is effective in
society
, more appreciated by members of the community. Whether instructors were more valued by
society
 in the past than they are
today
 or not?
Although
 some people disagree with the above mentioned statement because they believe that teachers still play an important role in
student's
Suggestion
a student's education
the student's education
education
, but in my view, despite their
importance
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important
 role in the
education
 of students they are no longer enough appreciated by people nowadays. There are numerous conspicuous reasons that support my point of view, and I would explore a few primary ones here. One of the primary reasons is that
today
 information
are
Suggestion
is
 more accessible than the past. To be specific, in the past people and
in particular
 students were more depend on instructors to receive knowledge from them. But,
today
, there are lots of resources to get data like as the Internet. As a consequence, members of
society
 no longer depend on teachers, so they unfortunately undermine underestimate their teacher's role nowadays. There is another reason that deserves some words here. The number of educated people significantly increased in the current century. I mean, in the past, there were a few educated people, so the importance of teachers was more prominent. Since the number of people that have higher
education
 increased,
society
 considers
education
 as an ordinary subject. Again, they are less appreciated by citizens.
Last
 but not least, at
this
 time the importance of money and possessions increased significantly. So, one of the most important factor that leads to be valuable in the peoples’ eyes is the amount of money that you earn. Because teachers don't receive high salaries in the vast majority of countries, they are less appreciated
today
. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that instructors don't get the value that they deserve todays.
This
 is partly because the easier accessibility of knowledge and
also
 the existence of more educated people and increased value of money.
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