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The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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The bar charts compare how many
people
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 in urban and rural
areas
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 were affected by
noise
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pollution
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 from four sources during daytime and nighttime in 2007.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 more
people
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 in
cities
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 experienced all types of
noise
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pollution
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 compared with rural
areas
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. In both charts, traffic was the main source of
noise
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pollution
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 at all times. Daytime
noise
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 from traffic affected 64
million
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people
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 in
cities
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 and 34
million
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 in rural
areas
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. At
night
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, traffic
noise
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 affected 48
million
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 city residents, double the figure for rural
areas
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.
Noise
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pollution
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 caused by trains affected slightly more
people
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 in
cities
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 compared with rural
areas
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, at 10
million
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 and 8
million
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 respectively during the daytime, and 8
million
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 and 6
million
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 respectively at
night
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. The remaining two sources of
noise
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pollution
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 were less significant. In
cities
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, daytime aircraft
noise
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 affected 4
million
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people
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 and half that number in rural
areas
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. The figure at
night
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 for
cities
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 and rural
areas
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 was 1
million
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. Those living in rural
areas
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 were not affected by
noise
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 from
industry
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.
However
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, 1
million
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 city residents experienced industrial
noise
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pollution
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 in the daytime, four times the number affected at
night
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, areas, noise, pollution, cities, million, night with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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