In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the more young people are encouraged to work or travel for a

gap

year

to relax and get experience, it brings both advantages and disadvantages for them.

In

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During

this

gap

year

, they can travel to every corner of the world to let their hair down and refresh

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

after a hard working

year

. When

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

, they can realise who they are, where they meant, and specially they can find out what they want to do. Sometimes, it helps them more confident because they have to get by everything when

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

alone and maybe they can find some point of view. When they work as a

tuitor

a person who gives private instruction (as in singing, acting, etc.)

tutor

, a waiter,...

in

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In

this

year

, it brings them a lot of experience and knowledge

that is

very useful for their future job.

Futhurmore

in addition

Furthermore

, they can receive a large some of money to afford for their tuition, and necessary things in their life. They become more responsible for their life,

independent

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independence

, and self-

awared

a grant made by a law court

award

awards

for what they do. In

constrast

the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared

contrast

, taking a

gap

year

mean they have to cut a

year

without studying in school, maybe they forget knowledge that they have studied before. And when they work, they think they can earn a lot of money, but in fact, they don't. When a

year

go

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goes

by, sometimes they don't want to go back school, don't want to have any principles in their

lifer

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life

. Afterwards,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

think take a

gap

year

has both advantages and disadvantage, it

is depend

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depends

on what they want as well their condition and what is the future they choose.