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Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Technology
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 is getting more attractive nowadays, while only some people can
use
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 it. Other people can not afford
technology
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 devices, so these people who do not buy high-tech devices have not any idea about the benefits of them, their
life
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 is hard as much as before.
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 essay will discuss both aspects, and ın my view is unfortunately poor people have learned and discussed less others. Doubtless,
technology
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 has developed dramatically. Every day, the new technological devices have appeared,
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, their sales are limited because of the people who suffer from poorness can not buy them. Only rich people can catch new things. They
use
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 technological things in order to ease their
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.
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, a high performance computer is faster than cheaper one, we can
use
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 it non-stop and we can create more
time
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 after finished our job at the computer. It is a rather basic, simple, but if you have more
time
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, you spend it your loved and
life
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 quality is getting higher.
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, in
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time
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, the rich people can joy and spending
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 hobbies.
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, the poor one struggle something without
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technology
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. Manuel is working, semi-automatic machines or old broken machines do not work efficiently.
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, she or he escape own
life
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, so many working hours and over stressed would ruin them. They do not have enough
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 doing anything.
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 to say, they have not known a new
technology
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 gadget, even if
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use
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using
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 it. They have never purchase rich one's own and
life
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 qualities would be very different due to can afford only basic things,
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 their cultural and intellectual development is restricted. In conclusion, I restate that the poor people cannot afford technological devices, while some people can buy at the
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 sales day. It becomes a gap the people who have different the rates of income.

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