Some believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor people, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Technology
is getting more attractive nowadays, while only some people can
use
it. Other people can not afford
technology
devices, so these people who do not buy high-tech devices have not any idea about the benefits of them, their
life
is hard as much as before.
This
essay will discuss both aspects, and ın my view is unfortunately poor people have learned and discussed less others. Doubtless,
technology
has developed dramatically. Every day, the new technological devices have appeared,
however
, their sales are limited because of the people who suffer from poorness can not buy them. Only rich people can catch new things. They
use
technological things in order to ease their
life
.
For example
, a high performance computer is faster than cheaper one, we can
use
it non-stop and we can create more
time
after finished our job at the computer. It is a rather basic, simple, but if you have more
time
, you spend it your loved and
life
quality is getting higher.
Also
, in
this
time
, the rich people can joy and spending
time
hobbies.
On the other hand
, the poor one struggle something without
last
technology
. Manuel is working, semi-automatic machines or old broken machines do not work efficiently.
Thus
, she or he escape own
life
, so many working hours and over stressed would ruin them. They do not have enough
time
doing anything.
That is
to say, they have not known a new
technology
gadget, even if
use
Suggestion
using
used
it. They have never purchase rich one's own and
life
qualities would be very different due to can afford only basic things,
also
their cultural and intellectual development is restricted. In conclusion, I restate that the poor people cannot afford technological devices, while some people can buy at the
first
sales day. It becomes a gap the people who have different the rates of income.

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