Introduction
Many underdeveloped countries nowadays face serious problems when they want to provide their citizens with a decent education, proper health sector and improvement in business.
Although
it’s believed that developed communities should help the poor ones, I strongly disagree with that opinion and I think rich countries should focus more on their own growth. Linking Words
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furthermore
, it’s the duty of poor countries to try to improve their own sectors.in addition
Furthermore
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On the one hand, the developed countries have spent much of their energy trying to improve their society in many ways. Providing the best hospitals, investing huge amounts of money for research purposes and making international businesses.
For example
, European countries are continuously opening new health centre in order to give their citizens the best and qualified health care. Linking Words
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consequently
, these rich countries should continue to develop their own sectors until it reaches a peak.Suggestion
Consequently
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On the other hand
, underdeveloped countries are poor not because of having no money, just because these communities are run by unskilled authorities and unqualified politicians who use the country's income to their own benefit leaving the poor people behind. Iraq, Linking Words
for instance
, is one of the richest countries in the world for selling petroleum. Linking Words
However
, there is the least quality of life and the citizens are mostly suffering from poverty. Linking Words
Thus
underdeveloped countries are poor because of bad system and careless authorities.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion, even poor nations need more development in any aspect of their lives. It’s their own responsibilities to take care about their contraries and try to stand on their own feet
instead
of asking for help from area in another part of the world.Linking Words