The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The graph illustrates the percentage of
car
ownership in Great
Britain
over a period of 36 years. At first glance, it can be concluded that the percentage of one
car
stays relatively the same,
while
People with no
car
show a dramatic decrease,
on the other hand
, the amount of two
cars
and three or more
cars
experienced a significant rise and a small rise respectively. In 1971, nearly 50
percent
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per cent
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of GB had no
car
while
near
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nearly
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44.4
percent
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per cent
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of
Britain
's families had one
car
. By the way, around 8
percent
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per cent
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of
Britain
's households had two
cars
and households with three or more
cars
were uncommon,
only
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with only
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1
percent
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per cent
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of society members falling into
this
category. In 2003, there was an impressively rose in people with two
cars
that came from 10
percent
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per cent
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in 1975 to 26
percent
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per cent
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in 2003, having said that,
Britain
households with no
car
showed a massive drop from 53
percent
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per cent
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in 1971 to nearly 25
percent
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per cent
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in 2003.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, britain, cars, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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