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The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists in England who travel to four different Brighton attractions from 1980 to 2010. Overall, it is evident that during 1980 and 2010 the most visited attraction
were
In or at or to what place
where
 the pavilion and the festival. While in 1980 the least popular attraction was the pier, but in 2010 it changed and the art gallery became the least favourite. During the year 1980 to 1995, there was a dramatic increase in the visitors to the pavilion from around 25% to approximately 50% and
then
 the percentage decreased to slightly up to 30% in the year 2010, but remain the most traveller places.
Similarly
, for the art gallery
first
, it shows an upward trend from around 20% in 1980 to close to 35% in 1985. After that, in the year 1985 to 2010, the percentage of the art gallery was declining significantly to less than 10%. The number of travellers who visit the festival fluctuated slightly, but remained close to 25% over the period.
Likewise
, the visitor to pier
also
 waved from 1980 to 2000
then
 rose exponentially from 10% to around 25%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • beneficial
  • harmful
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • financial independence
  • responsibility
  • valuable skills
  • impact
  • education
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  • social life
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