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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand?

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One of the major concerns all over the world is whether the agricultural sector can meet the growing demand for
food
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 worldwide.
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 issue is caused due to two main causes – the ever increasing society and extreme changes in climatic conditions.
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, it can be resolved through appropriate measures. The growing demand for cooking is caused by the ever increasing populace. Actually, over the
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 50 years, there was a drastic increase in human culture. In fact, world public is expected to increase from 7.9 billion in 2017 to 9.7 billion by 2050. Unfortunately, cuisine production has not kept pace with. Climatic changes happening due to various reasons like depletion of ozone layer, acid rain and global warming have led to a decrease in the production of foodstuff.
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 situation could be remedied by farmers by increasing the area under cultivation and by using improved farming techniques.
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, yield can be increased by using quality fertilizers, improved methods of irrigation and modern techniques called precision farming.
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 to
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, the government needs to take active participation in educating farmers about the use of
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 techniques and products. The international community
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 needs to step in. Countries where
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 is surplus must show the willingness to export it to poor countries at a nominal price.
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 ensure that everyone irrespective of their financial situation or nationality has access to three square meals a day. In conclusion, though the
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 is increasing and climatic changes have damaged the current supply of
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 by using improved farming techniques and bringing more area under cultivation,
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 production can be stimulated.

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