The tables below give information about sales of fair trade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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illustrates
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illustrate
sales
of Fairtrade* of coffee
and bananas
in 1999 and 2004 in five countries. the
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European
UK
, Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. Overall
, it was observed that denmark
was the highest spender for Change the capitalization
Denmark
sales
in
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of
coffee
in 1999 but it was overtaken by UK
in 2004 by a massive number. Significantly, Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
stayed the highest for sales
in Bananas
in both the years. To begin
with, it was observed that UK
had a huge incline in Correct article usage
the UK
sales
for
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of
coffee
from
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between
year
1999 and 2004. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Whereas
, it showed very slow growth in sales
when it came to bananas
. Switzerland
had double
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doubled
sales
of coffee
in 2004 and they showed a great incline in sale
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sales
for
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of
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the banana
banana
too from about 15 million Euros to about 47 million in 2004. Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
On the other hand
, Denmark had no suprising
numbers, as it showed only a gradual climb in Correct your spelling
surprising
sales
for coffee
and small
decline in Add an article
a small
sales
for bananas
. Where, Belgium came to be a shocker as it showed a minimal rise in sales
for coffee
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compared
bananas
where
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it
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sales
followed by Sweden with similar sales
, as
a slow price hike in Change preposition
with
coffee
and and
a similar drop in Remove the redundancy
apply
sales
for banana
. Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
Overall
, UK
and Switzerland
were the only european
countries with a huge Change the capitalization
European
diffrences
in their Correct your spelling
difference
differences
sales
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