You saw a column in the newspaper about you childhood friend. You would like to contact him or her. Write a letter to the editor of this newspaper asking for details about your friend. Inculde, Why do you want to contact him or her How the editor can contact you

Dear Sir or Madam, The
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of the day! My name is Manjit
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and through
this
epistle, I want to obtain information about my childhood friend.
Last
weekend, I saw an interesting column dates 12-09-2019 under Business Section, the article title, “ Women reaching the
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highest
of
business
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world”, not only mention the story about
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Sonam’s struggle and success in the corporate world
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but
also
awarded her the youngest woman entrepreneur. I am feeling overwhelmed by seeing her photo in that column. Kindly allow me to elaborate
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I am keen to ascertain about her?
Firstly
, she is my childhood friend, we were together from school till our graduation. Unfortunately due to his father transfer, neither
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get another chance to unite nor
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to
contact
each other, as I lost her
contact
details.
Fortunately
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after
viweing
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viewing
visiting
her
photograp
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photograph
in the newspaper, I am
excisted
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excited
to meet her as soon
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possible to recollect our old memories.
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would
be really appreciate
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if toy provide me
her
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contact
information. Or if
this
is against the rules, kindly provide her
my
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details, so that she can
contact
me. Please accept my gratitude
towards
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your help. A
favorable
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response is being anticipated. Yours faithfully, Manjit

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