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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In recent time, because of hectic schedule, people rarely spend time cooking by themselves, so fast
food
 has become an alternative choice
from
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for
 them and their family.
However
, the number of people who suffering from several health problems due to
junk
food
 consuming is increasing dramatically. Some people think that it is necessary for government to apply heavy taxes on fast
food
. I partly agree with the given opinion because of the following
reason
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reasons
. On the one hand, increasing taxes would raise
price
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prices
 and lower consumption. If the government implementing
high tax
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a high tax
high taxes
 on
junk
food
, fast
food
 companies will set a higher price on those foods to ensure their revenue, which lead people not being able to afford for fast
food
 because
it
it is
it's
 too expensive.
As a result
, they might buy
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 healthy, fresh items and cook at home. As a stark example, the cost of organic
food
 has proven extremely expensive for most people do
that is
 the reason why only a mere percentage of the population buy it regularly.
On the other hand
, imposing heavy tax not the only way to solve
this
 problem, there are some others solutions.
First
 of all,
authorities
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the authorities
 should limit
advertisement
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the advertisement
 of fast
food
 on
Internet
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the Internet
 and TV channel. As we all know children are the largest consumers of convenience meal, but they may not aware of the long-term consequence of
junk
food
 and they are
appealed
struck with fear, dread, or consternation
appalled
 by the advertisement on TV and other social media. So
this
 is government’s responsibility to
limits
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limit
 fast meals and broadcasts more health related adverts on TV.
Moreover
, people
nowadays becomes
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nowadays become
 more and more busy because of jobs and school.
Therefore
, the government should impose rules on working and studying schedule so that citizens could enjoy healthy meals with their family. In conclusion, it is clear that
junk
food
 should be taxed at a higher rate to prevent people from illness.
However
, it is
also
 some other measures to protect people’s health.
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