Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Few people believe that the

government

spends more money on

art

an

artists

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artist

than giving funds to the public services

such

as

education

,

health

, safety and so on. I agree that public services need more

funding but

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funding, but

not at the cost of the

art

, which are still very important.

To begin

with

health

care

should be available to everyone for free. Public

health

care

is paid by the

government

utilizing the money from taxes for anyone to access to the quality of

care

and treatment, whereas private

health

care

is inequitable because only wealthy people can afford it. One clear example is The National

Health

Service in the United Kingdom provides free

healthcare

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health care

for every resident. Apart from

healthcare

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healthcare, education

education

,

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,

a moot issue everywhere, is undergoing

tremandous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

tremendous

changes to meet new challenges. In today's age, it is necessary for each and every person to lead a healthy life.

Government

should not neglect

this

sector and allow more capital in the evolution and advancement

education

system. Private schools and colleges are

incresing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

their fees day by day, so

government

should promote build more

education

institutions. There are

also

reasons why

government

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the government

should spend money on

art

. One of the prominent

reason

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reasons

is the

art

reflects the culture of a

country

and promotes people's understanding toward their culture and architecture.

Secondly people

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Secondly, people

from outside the

country

comes to see the historical building and by

maintening

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintaining

mentioning

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

artistic

lagecy

(law) a gift of personal property by will

legacy

of a

country

and can encourage tourists to visit again and again.

This

practice increase the tourism which eventually boost the economy of a

country

. Without

governent

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

funding many

art

forms will die down and that will be a huge lose for the

country

.