The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
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illustrates from the sample subset of 100,000 Correct your spelling
chart
people
whether they have travelled to Use synonyms
foreign
country and for what Add an article
a foreign
reason
they have travelled in the years 1994-98 Use synonyms
furthermore
, the Linking Words
second
chart shows Linking Words
their
destinations that they have travelled for.
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the
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the
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apply
of
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the
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people
gave holidays as the Use synonyms
reason
to go abroad Use synonyms
while
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,
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apply
people
primarily went to Use synonyms
western
region.
The total Add an article
the western
number
of Use synonyms
people
that Use synonyms
have
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went
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gone
for
abroad Change preposition
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were
28,828 in the Correct subject-verb agreement
was
year
1998 which highest for the given Use synonyms
years
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year
while
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year
1995 saw the lowest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
visiting other countries which Use synonyms
is
21,610. Change the verb form
are
Holiday
, business and Fix the agreement mistake
Holidays
visit
to friends and relatives have seen the highest Fix the agreement mistake
visits
number
in the Use synonyms
year
1998 with numbers 20,700, 3957 and 3181 respectively. For the Use synonyms
reason
other Use synonyms
reason
in the Use synonyms
year
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1997
the Add a comma
,1997
number
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people
gave Use synonyms
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reason
as 1054 which is highest for that category.Add an article
the reason
a reason
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