Mrs Barrett,An english speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours in a day next summer.Write a letter to mirs Barrett suggest how could you help her in her work. say why you like to do this job. when you will and not be will avaible.
Hello Mrs Barrett,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am more than happy to help in your home. I saw an advertisement that you are looking for a person to do gardening in the summer session.
My name is Mandeep and I am living in an apartment next to the main road. I am studying agriculture at the university, I was looking for something like this
. As I mentioned being an agricultural student I have good knowledge about plants and their behaviour along with
their diseases. Not only that I also
have ideas to improve the growth of flowers and get fruits fast without any pesticides.
I am interested in gardening because my father is a farmer in my backcountry and I was doing the same thing. Moreover
, I have a project to do, in which I have to record the growth of plants in different weathers, so working in your garden will be very helpful for me too.
Furthermore
, I have my classes early in the morning and I can come in the evening. But, am not available on Saturdays because I have evening classes.
I am waiting for your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
MandeepSubmitted by mandeep10022 on
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coherence cohesion
Although the letter is well-organized, consider dividing the content into more distinct paragraphs. For example, a separate paragraph for your introduction, another for your qualifications, another for your availability, etc.
task achievement
Try to provide a little more detail about how your skills will specifically help Mrs. Barrett. For instance, mention particular tasks you can perform or cite examples of past experiences.
task achievement
The tone is warm and polite, appropriate for a formal letter offering assistance.
coherence cohesion
The closing statement is courteous, showing respect and eagerness for a response.
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