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There are many type of music in the world today why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country is more important and should it preserved or is international music that is heard everywhere nowadays is more useful to a society?

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Now a days most
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Nowadays, most
Nowadays most
 people like listening
music
 in
there
of them or themselves
their
 free time.
some
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Some
 people feel good to
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 traditional
music
 and other thinks that
to
being one more than one
two
 more listen international
music
 it's gives
benifit
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
 to our society.
impornt
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Import
Impornt
 of traditional
music
 and international
music
 express in
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
 passages.
To begin
 with,
music
Suggestion
the music
is takes
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takes
has taken
is taken
 important role of life
,
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,
music
is gives
Suggestion
gives
 us relaxation form the
strass
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Strass
streets
Strauss
. Some people has
life
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a life
 full of
strass
the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)
stress
stories
citrus
 and some other reason that type of situation you need
to
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for
of
 some relaxation so, that time listen
music
for
Suggestion
to
 feel good.
Moreover
, traditional
music
 is one of the important
role
Suggestion
roles
 of life. Traditional
music
 gives us knowledge about that country.
However
, now day younger generation did not listen traditional
music
 they
not know
Suggestion
don't know
 about traditional
music
. So they most like to listen international
music
 of different countries m

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