You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Hello, Dear

Ms.

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Mayer I'm writing to you to let you know about a problem that has risen recently; I have endured a car accident

last

Monday.

Thanks

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the lord that I haven't suffered from any fatal or debilitating injuries.

However

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I do suffer from a left broken ankle and a broken right forearm. Considering these novel and unfortunate circumstances I'm compelled to

postone

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postpone

post one

moving to the apartment. Doctors say that I'm destined to

completey

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completely

heal by a month from now. So you might expect me

moving

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in around the

third

of August. Please accept my

heartfel

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heartfelt

apologies for any inconveniences that

this

might muster Yours sincerely

Tue Feb 25 2020

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

106 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask your landlord if you can pay your rent late.

Nowadays young adults seem to prefer to spend their leisure shopping. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In some parts of the world, traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The plans below show a student accommodation buildings 2010 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.