Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree?

Cultural diversity opens a way to explore other
culture
and
brodens
make broader
broaden
our perspective. Travelling to different
culture
impartsa
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imparts a
need to adapt to their local factories and Customs to a certain extent.
Merits
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The merits
of these
practice
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practices
are quite outstanding taking the demerits in to concern. Understanding and willing to be a
part
of
different
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a different culture
different cultures
culture
in turn reflect the broader perspective of our mind. It
ows
be obliged to pay or repay
owes
us respect from the people of the native community. Being a
part
of local practice and Customs
open
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opens
the door
to understand
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to understanding
the
culture
in depth and how deeply the roots of
culture
is penetrating
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are penetrating
in the minds of
natives
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the natives
.
For instance
Deepavali, the festival of light and Holi, the festival of colours hold a
great
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greater
level of significance in Northern
part
of India. These celebrations shed a new light of positivity and harmony to our minds. All these festivals are now accepted in most
part
of the world especially among Indians.
However
, despite of all the benefits cultural diversity can offer, in certain ways it can influence our personality badly.
outside
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Outside
culture
should never let us carried away by its positive like and traditions. The core values and
evence
something that happens at a given place and time
events
ovens
avenues
of our personality traits that we
aquired
come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
through our family Heritage should not let go off by the influence of Advanced
culture
.
Lot
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A lot
of negativity is visibly present in any different
culture
that may lead to
culture
shock. Alcohol drinks and nude dance parties are common in most advanced
culture
. To be accepted by the natives of
such
culture
, you should never give up your personal identity. From the light of
aforementioned facts
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the aforementioned facts
, it is evident that adopting to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture
broadens our perspective and helps to earn the heart of many people by sharing mutual respect to each
culture
, yet one should never fail to give up individuality and personal assistance for the sake of
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
culture
. Our traditions and heritage and moral values that we have imbibed through years of practice is not to let go off, when we step into
a
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an
advance. It is our roots and our love should never leave behind.
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