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Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create? What are the possible solutions?

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Several individuals are endeavouring hard to maintain a balance between
work
 and family life.
This
 essay will
first
 suggest that the biggest problem caused by
this
 is the increase in stress level of people and
further
 outline, adequate hiring and proper delegation of
work
 by the employer as the most viable solution. Employees struggle hard to give equal importance to both office and family life,
thus
 suffer from immense pressure, anxiety and mental issues.
In other words
, people get completely exhausted both physically and mentally which leads to the breakdown of family and career. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The National Institute Of Neurology found that more than 80 percent of people are suffering from some form of depression and over 60 percent of them mentioned balancing
work
-life as the main reason. A possible solution of the aforementioned problem is that employers must hire workforce depending on the
work
 size and should ensure that there is a proper delegation of
work
.
This
 is to say, employing an adequate number of employees will assure equitable distribution of duties and responsibilities among them.
As a result
, they will not only be able to complete the projects within the deadline, but will
also
 be able to fulfil their family needs. To exemplify, one of my friends who regularly complained about the stress in managing job and personal life, was prescribed anti-depressants for the same, showed significant improvement when new hiring initiated and
work
 load reduced To conclude, individuals are facing a rise in stress levels because of balancing and giving equal priority to both career and loved ones.
However
, the problem can be tackled with the necessary steps taken by the employer by hiring sufficient employees and lowering the
work
 load with proper delegation of
work
.
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