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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -Give detail of the purchase -Describe the problem -Explain why you need a replacement urgently.

#purchase #company #email #-give #detail #-describe #-explain #replacement
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a replacement for my T-shirt and cargo which I purchased from your website
last
 Friday. At the onset, a little description of
this
 clothing is:
the
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 T-shirt is black-coloured Gucci cotton with code 55 XL sized and the blue cargo is of Adidas brand with 38 waist. Both of these items were $350 and the order number was p362489. No sooner did I receive my order than I realised that the T-shirt was of L size and Cargo was of pink colour
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 I was totally shocked at how a world-famous Amazon company could make
such
 a mistake. Since I have ordered it for my upcoming dance competition, I request you please replace these items as early as possible. It will be really appreciable if you deliver new items up to next Monday and I am ready to pay fast delivery charges. I hope you will consider my plea and take quick action on it. Yours faithfully, Jacob Brown
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity.
complete response
Consider elaborating more on why the replacement is urgently needed for the competition.
greeting and closing
The writer uses a clear greeting and closing, making the letter formal and polite.
logical structure
The logical structure of the letter is clear, with details of the purchase, description of the problem, and explanation of the urgency outlined effectively.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is appropriate for a formal request and maintains a polite yet firm expression of dissatisfaction.

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