The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
The chart illustrates the modification in the way British people travel by comparing the average distance a person transport by different modes of carriers between the
year
1985 and 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it is clear that
cars were the British’s primary mode of transportation, on the other hand
, taxi
was the least means preferred by English travellers.
As we can see in the table that English people transport nearly 6500 Add an article
the taxi
a taxi
miles
in the year 2000, which was an upward trend with almost 1,750 miles
higher, in comparison with 4,740
Correct article usage
the 4,740
miles
British citizens travelled in 1985. We can make a comparison among all vehicles, cars were the most popular means as almost 3,200 miles
travelled out of 4,740 ones and showed a similar trend in the next
15 years with an increase in
over 1,600 Change preposition
of
miles
per person.
It is clear that
local buses were the most favoured mode of travel in 1985 in comparison with train and bicycle use,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
showed a considerable decrease after a fifteen-year interval while
train and the other means rose sharply. Meanwhile, the average distance British went on foot was significant, but went down slightly from 255 to under 240 in 2000. Among all the figures listed in the table, Add an article
the taxi
a taxi
taxi
had the lowest distance travelled with just 13 Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
miles
in 1985, then
showed an ignorable increase to 42 miles
per English person.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words miles with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼