Some think that experiment done on animals are cruel so it should be prohibited. To what extend do you agree?

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It is commonly believed by some people that testing cosmetic or medicine of animals is the necessary process to ensure the safety of a product before selling to human while others argue that

this

action is cruel and harmful to

animal’s life

Suggestion

the animal’s life

and required to be terminated. In my opinion, I completely agree that the action to harm

animal

Suggestion

animals

an animal

, even for the purpose to protect of human is unacceptable.

First

, animals have the basic right to survive and be protected by human.

This

is because animals are fragile living things and unable to protect themselves from people’s intrusive. There are several pieces of research claim that if some animals, especially chimpanzee is not reserved and excluded from serious damage in any experiment, they will be extinct within 2050.

In addition

, the extinction of animal can cause high severity damage to the overall ecosystem.

Therefore

, commercial organizations should stop using the animal to test the efficiency of their products.

Second

, there is a large number of animals that have been torturing for a long time as they receive side effect of the chemical during the experiment.

For instance

, the cosmetic company, which invent new chemical cosmetic and testing to the monkeys in the lab room to make sure that their product is safe for clients, causes more than fifty monkeys to face serious allergic without healing the animals.

As a result

, a large number of monkeys that has serious sickness end up deathly killed due to the chemical in the testing process.

This

kind of action is immoral, which set a bad example for all commercial business to brutal the animals and make profits from those cruel actions.

Furthermore

this

will cause young generation to perceive the method of a testing product with animals as the common things which decline the moral value in human. In conclusion,

although

some experiments required animals to be part of their testing process to ensure the success of products, all actions that might cause a serious effect to animals must be banned as it causes extinction among animals and declines the moral value in soc

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

350 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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controversial
ethical concerns
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medical research
scientific knowledge
new treatments
regulated
ethical guidelines
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alternative methods
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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