Some think that experiment done on animals are cruel so it should be prohibited. To what extend do you agree?

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It is commonly believed by some people that testing cosmetic or medicine of animals is the necessary process to ensure the safety of a product before selling to human while others argue that
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action is cruel and harmful to
animal’s life
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the animal’s life
and required to be terminated. In my opinion, I completely agree that the action to harm
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animals
an animal
, even for the purpose to protect of human is unacceptable.
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, animals have the basic right to survive and be protected by human.
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is because animals are fragile living things and unable to protect themselves from people’s intrusive. There are several pieces of research claim that if some animals, especially chimpanzee is not reserved and excluded from serious damage in any experiment, they will be extinct within 2050.
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, the extinction of animal can cause high severity damage to the overall ecosystem.
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, commercial organizations should stop using the animal to test the efficiency of their products.
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, there is a large number of animals that have been torturing for a long time as they receive side effect of the chemical during the experiment.
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, the cosmetic company, which invent new chemical cosmetic and testing to the monkeys in the lab room to make sure that their product is safe for clients, causes more than fifty monkeys to face serious allergic without healing the animals.
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, a large number of monkeys that has serious sickness end up deathly killed due to the chemical in the testing process.
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kind of action is immoral, which set a bad example for all commercial business to brutal the animals and make profits from those cruel actions.
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,
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will cause young generation to perceive the method of a testing product with animals as the common things which decline the moral value in human. In conclusion,
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some experiments required animals to be part of their testing process to ensure the success of products, all actions that might cause a serious effect to animals must be banned as it causes extinction among animals and declines the moral value in soc

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cruel
  • prohibited
  • controversial
  • ethical concerns
  • benefits
  • medical research
  • scientific knowledge
  • new treatments
  • regulated
  • ethical guidelines
  • minimize harm
  • alternative methods
  • explored
  • encouraged
  • public opinion
  • divided
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