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The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.

The table below shows the results of a 20-year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events.
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The table illustrates four reasons why adults in the UK have attended
arts
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events
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 over the past twenty
years
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. The major reason over the whole twenty-year period was a desire to see a specific performer or artist;
while
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 the least important reason was attending
arts
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events
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 for work-related reasons. The
percentage
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 of
people
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 who attended
events
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 out of a desire to see a particular performer has remained relatively stable throughout the twenty-year period; varying from 58% twenty
years
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 ago to 56%
today
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.
On the other hand
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, the
percentage
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 of
people
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 accompanying children has shown a significant increase, from 9% 20
years
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 ago to just under a quarter
today
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. As far as those who attended
arts
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events
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 because of special occasions or celebrations are concerned, the
percentage
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 fell slightly from 27% 20
years
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 ago to 20% a decade ago, dropping dramatically to 9%
today
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. There has been a slight increase in the
percentage
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 of
people
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 attending
arts
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events
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 for work or business, from 6% 20
years
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 ago to just over 10%
today
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.
Overall
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, there has been a rise in
people
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 attending
events
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 in order to accompany children and for work-related reasons,
while
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 fewer
people
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 choose to attend an
arts
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 event as a form of celebration.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words arts, events, years, percentage, people, today with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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