levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. what are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

Youth

crime is increasingly becoming a challenge in today's world. It is really surprising to see kids as young as 15 years, facing charges on account of some criminal activities. There are several reasons behind

this

upsetting trend. Lack of proper education in rural areas is one of the major causes. Rural

youth

often migrates to nearby cities in search of better opportunities and to improve their standard of living. When they are unable to find decent work they may sometimes be driven to unethical ways. If they are provided with

good education

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a good education

and training, it will be easier for them to find good jobs

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Another reason can be lack of proper counselling. Today's

youth

has become quite vulnerable. They lack emotional strength and a good conscience.

For instance

, because of peer

presurre

the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)

pressure

, a teenager might fall into the trap of drugs

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He may think he is doing a harmless

deed but

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deed, but

eventually end up being a part of a smuggling gang. Some teenagers find themselves unable to handle their

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hormones or emotions and often commit something unethical

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A professional counselling will not only help them to bring their lives back on

track but

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track, but

also

be helpful in

builing

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

their future. Another important factor is poverty. Poverty can make an underprivileged

person

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people

resort to unethical actions during difficult situations.

For example

, if a person is unable to clear his debts and is being humiliated

for

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the same

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he might develop a temptation to somehow silence his

oppresors

a person of authority who subjects others to undue pressures

oppressors

oppressor

. Government can play a major role in uplifting the country's

youth

by providing them with basic education, counselling and good employment

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This

is very much important as a country's future depends on its

youth

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economic disparity
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levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. what are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.

Fully explain your ideas

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.

In some countries, boys and girls are educated in different school rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?

Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion.

Many organisations and companies ask their staff to wear a uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? What kind of jobs should have a work uniform?