Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

#cities #people #governments #towns

In the 21st century everyone wants to move smart city where basic necessities are available at one

step

the event of something ending

stop

. There was a time, when people have

drems

a series of mental images and emotions occurring during sleep

dreams

sttledown

cities but

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cities, but

now due to technical advancement the human

ned

require as useful, just, or proper

need

needs

and

can be fulfilled in rural areas as well. According to me the issue with rural areas are transportation and technical modernization.

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these major issues resolved by the Government

then

people will prefer to stay in

villeges

a community of people smaller than a town

villages

, towns or

countryside

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the countryside

Although

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

always put

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always puts

their best to connect the urban areas with these small

town so

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towns, so

towns so

every citizen can have

equally

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equal

right to use these resources.

Thu Feb 27 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

105 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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