Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

In the 21st century everyone wants to move smart city where basic necessities are available at one
step
the event of something ending
stop
. There was a time, when people have
drems
a series of mental images and emotions occurring during sleep
dreams
to
sttledown
in
cities but
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cities, but
now due to technical advancement the human
ned
require as useful, just, or proper
need
needs
and
can be fulfilled in rural areas as well. According to me the issue with rural areas are transportation and technical modernization.
if
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If
these major issues resolved by the Government
then
people will prefer to stay in
villeges
a community of people smaller than a town
villages
, towns or
countryside
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the countryside
.
Although
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
always put
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always puts
their best to connect the urban areas with these small
town so
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towns, so
towns so
every citizen can have
equally
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equal
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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