Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays,
new generation
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a new generation
the new generation
are
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is
keen to emigrate to the cities in order to get a
job
or study, especially, rural dwellers are willing to move to the Megacities. The reasons of
this
tend
turn sharply; change direction abruptly
trend
tent
is varied. Some youngsters migrate to the big cities for educational purposes, while other people want to get a well-paid
job
.
However
, in many cases,
job
seekers cannot find an employment. In
this
reason, some people believe that staying at home is a better solution. On the plus side, there are ample evidences that
shows
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show
moving to big cities is beneficial for young people.
Firstly
, big cities provides many
job
opportunities foe talented people because there are plenty of multinational companies which want to hire young talents.
Secondly
, youngsters can pursue
further
studies in some fields like Management, Science or Economics in well-known Universities which are not present in rural areas and develop their skills in these subjects. It
helps
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will help
them to get a better
job
in the future.
However
, the downside cannot be ignored. The axiomatic argument is
concern
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concerned
with rural development. Migrating young generation to big cities leads to decline skill
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
. So growth and progress in rural areas are not done appropriately.
Moreover
, migrating to big towns has many
problem
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problems
such
as huge living expenses, lack of money, accommodation and living away from parents and friends. In conclusion, most of the people in rural areas tend to move to big cities for reasons related to their career and their education.
Although
there are some disadvantages, we cannot deny that the individuals and society are benefiting much from
this
phenomenon.

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