Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried out by private companies, individuals or government?

On one hand, the world we live in has been challenged by many natural disasters recently, and wide spread of new deadly diseases among people It's really a need of the hour to make investments in research that eliminates our human suffering.
This
is where, more private organisations play a vital role in funding and managing the medical projects. Since there
are
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is
private entity
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a private entity
, there is more flexibility in decision making which
also
drives innovation at a faster rate.
Additionally
, more private institutions have access to
latest technologies
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the latest technologies
to be used for the research purpose which
also
increases efficiency and productivity.
For instance
, pharmaceutical firms like Novaritis invest more in automation on production of medicines which increases its supply with time.
On the other hand
, it is
also
equally important to involve
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
in to
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in
into
such
projects because of
uncertainities
being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance
uncertainties
uncertainty
of
type
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types
the type
of diseases with respect to their geographies.
For instance
, if there is an outbreak of a rare disease in a poor locality, government should intervene in the areas of logistics and pricing of the medicines. Government can invest in
such
projects not only by funding, by providing space and resources to undergo
such
initiatives.
This
helps in encouraging private companies signing
a
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an
MoU with governments considering subsidisation on pricing
in
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at
times of emergencies. In conclusion,
although
private funding is needed for medical projects, we
also
should consider its effects on our society by rightful intervention by government bodies.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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