University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education plays a vital role in every individual's life, regardless of their age, gender and nationality. There is debate that people should pay for university education or not. I think tertiary study should be free for all.

To begin

with, the foremost reason for free teaching is it brings parity in society. Some people are unable to take admission in higher literacy because of low income. That's why they less less literate, it's benefit will be to the weaker section of the society.

Moreover

, there will be tremendous impact on the economy of the nation as all the people will get employment with his enhanced knowledge and skills.

For instance

, where literacy rate is

hight

greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount

high

there income is

also

high.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

120 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The pictures show the process of making cherry jam. Describe the process.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

The bar charts below give the information about USA marriage and divorces rates between 1970 and 2000 and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the year.