University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Education plays a vital role in every individual's life, regardless of their age, gender and nationality. There is debate that people should pay for university education or not. I think tertiary study should be free for all.
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with, the foremost reason for free teaching is it brings parity in society. Some people are unable to take admission in higher literacy because of low income. That's why they less less literate, it's benefit will be to the weaker section of the society.
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, there will be tremendous impact on the economy of the nation as all the people will get employment with his enhanced knowledge and skills.
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, where literacy rate is
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greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
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there income is
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high.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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