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Young people are leaving their homes frome rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantage?

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In recent years, young people tend to continue their education and improve their occupation by moving to cities
due t
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the cities
o lack of facilities and having different opportunities.
Although
 there are number
s of dr
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a number
number
awbacks occurring to immigrate youngsters, I believe that the benefits involved are more.
To begin
, the fast growth of immigration to cities has many significant factors. Considering that the most significant reason is the availability of better university and job opportunities there.
Also
 young people have a chance to choose many different fields of study without any restriction in equipped and modern university.
Moreov
er they able
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Moreover, they
to reach high s
tandard of li
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a high standard
high standards
ving by employing in many companies and organization that exist in big cities.
In other words
 high income and variet
y of ca
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a variety
reers in cities attract them to replace.
Although
, moving to the city have many drawbacks like air pollution, traffic jam and many other problems, I believe that the advantages of
this
 replacement outweigh due to the fact that increasing graduated people increase the level of society’s education so
this
 society able to develop faster. In the
o
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On
ther hand more people can live in appropriate circumstance in city i
n or
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the city
a city
cities
der to find better
job in mo
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a better job
better jobs
dern cities. To conclude, in recent decades, young generation keen on immigrate to the urbane
area
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urban
urbanized
from rural area because of many facilities and attraction. Regardless of disadv
antage, I th
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a disadvantage
ink the benefits are more remarkable to develop a society.
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