The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph compares forested
land
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

of the world over
15-year
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a 15-year

The noun phrase 15-year period seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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period, starting from 1990 to 2005. Generally, as the whole time, Europe had the biggest forested
land
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

( 1001 ha in 2005 ) and
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in

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contrastly
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contrast

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Oceania had the smallest forested
land
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(197 ha in 2005). It's clear from the table that Europe and Asia were the only places
of
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in

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which the forest area
were
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was

The plural verb were does not appear to agree with the singular subject area. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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increasing. But Asia rise a slight increase from 576 ha (in 1990) to 584 ha ( in 2005), only half
Europe
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of Europe

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. Africa and South America had
a significant fluctuations
Correct the article-noun agreement
significant fluctuations
a significant fluctuation

The indefinite article a may not be required with the plural noun fluctuations in this sentence. Consider removing the article, or changing the noun to singular.

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. The former saw
also
Linking Words

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downward
Correct article usage
a downward

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from 749 ha in 1990 to
tumbed
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number

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691 ha in 2005. And the
later
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latter

The word later doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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too, from 946 ha to 882 ha. North
Amercia
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America

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and Oceania
remaining
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remain

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maintain year by year, just a down insignificantly. The forest of North America had a slight drop from 708 ha to 705 ha and
then
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

maintain until 2005. It's noticeable that the forested
land
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

of the world
play
Correct subject-verb agreement
plays

It seems that the verb play does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

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an important role in life because it's a source of life for humans.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words land with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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