Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, our

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has been greatly extended in comparison to the past thanks to various healthcare innovations,

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, some people believe that it is a must to significantly increase in the

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the state of being retired from one's business or occupation

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. In my opinion, extend the working

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could lead to some remarkable benefits,

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, it would be accompanied with some inevitable problems. It is undeniable that changing the working

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ceiling could bring considerable advantages to the nations.

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, having the workforce increased remarkably with experienced workers would allow the economy to develop in all aspects and create wealth for their nations. Foreseeing

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, many countries have applied the working

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extension in their policies and received great improvement in all economy performance

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. Another interesting perk of retirement

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extension is that it helps companies to have their experts staying longer, which results in promising organization performance. A great example of

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is more than a half of

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the CEOs

of corporations in

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last year

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the last year

Forbes’ top 100 is above 65, and these people are all regarded as their company invaluable assets.

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, increasing

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of retirement could lead to some serious social problems. The

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issue is that it would result in corporations with the old

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network holding top positions for too long, which would discourage younger and potential employees to climb up their career ladder. Many entrepreneurs have revealed that one of the reasons they chose to start their own business despite of having experience working for prestigious companies simply is that it is impossible to thrive for top positions. Another issue is that when having to work at

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, people would lose their enthusiasm towards their jobs, and no longer keeping their efficiency. After decades of working hard, most employees should spend their time taking rests, enjoying life and doing things that they have always wanted to do

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of continuing to devote

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work

. To sum up, increasing the retirement

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has its pros and cons,

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, it is suggested that policy makers should make careful consideration before choosing to apply

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policy.